AwesomeSocks

I really like this poem :) It flows nicely and has great rhythm. "I had a desire for revenge Then I remembered Nothing could confront The waves of death" I ...

Yes, this story suddenly changed! I hated the other one I did, so I submitted another...please review this one differently!

Take flight and be free, The cage that binds Must be lifted From thy body Skip, hop, Run, jump, Fly to the highest Mountain peak The skies call, The valley ...

This is WONDERFUL!!!! It made me laugh so hard! I love Romeo and Juliet, but I also love chatspeak fanfictions, so this is great! I definitely hope to read more ...

“Why do you always say sorry?” he practically yelled at me. “You act like everything’s your fault. You’re smothering everyone around you! Sai can take care of herself. She doesn’t ...

I love your writing. It never fails to be deep and descriptive! One thing that irks me is your use of periods. It might flow better if you used commas, ...

I love this! It is so descriptive, and puts a new light on fire. No pun intended... The word choice was fantastic: "Tendrils," "Writhing," "Pyra..." I don't usually like poetry ...

I'm in awe. This is simply... beautiful! I love the way you format this, with incomplete sentences in each stanza. It has a very nice rhythm to it. The words ...

Rain Rain falls to the ground, It looks sad through my window. Flowers droop and weep Rushing Water Rivers wind through hills. Rushing water 'round the bends Twisting and turning ...

This poem is marvelous! It gives me a dark feeling, with a sort of desperate ache in my heart. It made me think of desperation, a girl seeking love, but ...

Chapter the First I stomped into the wash room, slamming the door shut behind me. I turned the sink on full blast. Running my fingers through my hair, I flicked ...

"I groaned, and said, “Whatever happens, I’m blaming it on you. You started it.”" This part made me laugh XD Tristyn and Lyka are so adorable together! I really like ...

This story is great! I love the foreshadowing with the charms and the quiz. There was a bit of rambling at the beginning, but it carried on quite nicely. At ...

This is really great! I enjoy your writing style. I like the way you format this, with a piece for each person. It leaves a bit a mystery, and I ...

Prologue The wind blew tendrils of Aleta’s hair around her face as she closed her eyes, breathing in the clear ocean air. She took a step closer to the water, ...