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This is really beautiful! (Then again, maybe I'm just biased because my name is Autumn...? ;)) "A winding trail teeming with life"

I love this! Your use of rhyming was fantastic. Usually a rhyming poem sounds cheesy and dumb because of the restriction of words, but this came of really nicely. "A ...

Edward’s white, beautiful face stared at me from where he clung to the window sill. I thought about screaming. I thought about running. I thought about opening the window and ...

This is great! I like the rhyming, though it sounded a little constricted. But it flows nicely :) I like how you said "I am unspoken." "You make me smile. ...

I like this :) It gave me chills. Personally, I don't remember 9-11. But it sounds horrible (duh), and I know it was painful for a lot of people (especially ...

I walked slowly up the stairs. Now that I had fully awakened, the hurt was starting to catch up with me. I clutched at my sides, the hole ripping through ...

Eyes burning, Lungs aching No one to save me, I sink ever further The world is dark, But somewhat peaceful Will it stay this way? No air in this prison, ...

I really like this :) It's short and to the point (literally :P) "Paint me a picture, A splatter of red,"

I'm ready!!! I didn't get very far last year (only 5,000 words :(), so I'm going with my old story. I have so many kinks to work out! Hopefully I ...

This is really deep. I can totally see this as a song. Like the rating implies, it is a little disturbing, but I still like it :) It's very raw, ...

I really like this poem :) It's deep, and I like the shift in the middle. The beginning takes on a different meaning after the shift. The words may be ...

This is great :) I like the repetition of the word "one" in the first three stanzas. It gave it some nice rhythm. "Death is a carnivore, a beast"

I loved the Velveteen Rabbit or How Toys Become Real by Margery Williams. In fact, I still love it! Dr. Seuss was also marvelous :)

I'm pretty new to YWS, so I don't know much about this site. I just want to know what the stars on profiles mean. And the badges. And the point ...

I love the idea of this poem! It speaks loudly to me :) There were a few confusing points caused by grammatical error, such as this: "This man made issue." ...