Awake

First off, congrats on chapter 16!! It has finally arrived and you did a decent job. But now I have to critique... It felt very detached and lacking in emotion, ...

Banned for not deciding on a location

pretty much TUBM wants a theme song for their life???

Banned for nothing

Awesome 9/10 The lion king

sure, hugs are cool TUBM is hot and cold at the same time

banned for being hypocritical

9.3/10 that's where I sometimes I take a holiday to...

9.8/10 the era where I wander

8/10 I will have to read your story.

9.6/10 not too depressing for me...

9.5/10 it really grabbed my attention, for some reason it reminds me of my heart. (symbolically of course)

9.2/10 for possible vamps, as for ellephant's location, I hope it where a guys arms personally

banned for not letting me join the crazy

9/10 gotta love the flame!