Awake

Hello, Long time no see... well read. This is a really good chapter, I wished it could have been longer! I loved the little suspense in the beginning as the ...

Hello Dark Eyed Pixie, I would love to give yo a detailed long review about how much you've dragged me in to your work but at the moment I should ...

Wow! :o it almost looks like two negatives morphed in to one! A little creepy but cool! :shock: How can you critique this, it just kind of happened? I'd like ...

Hi again, Maybe I wasn't clear on what I was saying about the quote; Not to be sounding like in in a snit but your family owned businesses can not ...

Hello, I'm in a rush but I wanted to give a quick review! :) thedelphinater did a good review and there isn't much else to be said. I definitely agree, ...

thank you so much PhantomInvader, your review as very thorough and really appreichated! I'll give you a little reward!

Thanks for the reviews! DrPepperSkaterPunk, is there anything I can help to unconfuse you? Is there anything in particular that I should make clearer? Thanks again.

Hello Mars, Well... to say the least you have something very interesting going on. I had never read a one sided conversation before. It's almost like your in the persons ...

Heres it is... sorry about length Chapter 2 Honey, amber eyes but they quickly began to darken and harden into black granite. As the rocks glinted, my whole body lifted ...

dommy, I have to say, you have a very interesting story going on... I've read all the chapters so far and couldn't pick out anything different from what is already ...

Thanks again! My spelling sometimes slips! I really appriechate all the reviews! :D

Thank you so much for your critiques! More are always welcome!

HI kris, Very interesting, I had to read it twice. It appears pretty and sweet in the beginning, beautiful middle and manipulative and to me, slightly aggressive in the end. ...

Hi, I'm A newbie to this site.... and I'm a bit apprehensive about posting my "ideas" as I call them. I will greatly appreciate every critique. I have a few ...

Rodhead, It was filled with natural beauty. Very lovely.