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Re: (Oh-so-short) Preface of my untitled novel.
Personally, I don't like to go far in to spelling nitpicks and stuff, so i think the other guys got the majority of that. This really grabbed my attention. As ...
Jun 29, 2009 -
Re: Clouded Gem
Clouded Gem The embers of my hope cease to glow Radiant colours. Ebony ash asphyxiates any chance of Redemption. Emptiness pulses through numb and lifeless Veins that cringe through out ...
Jun 29, 2009 -
Re: Tribute to Keisha
Hey, Not fair, you have me crying here! It's beautiful sweetie! I'm going to PM you, OK?
Jun 29, 2009 -
Re: Cat Eye
Is is very pretty! Very delicate. Not that I know very much about sketching but i think you could have used a darker pencil or pen. Good job! :D
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Seven Deadly Sins - Greed
Hello again! This one is tricky. I understand the anger and aggression in greed and it is displayed well the drawing but I don't feel it as strong. There feels ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Seven Deadly Sins - Envy
Hello RayneChild, This is my favorite out of the three so far! The animated wolf character is very... appealing, intriguing. It's out of the ordinary and I like it! The ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Strange Birds Chapter 2
Thanks everyone!
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Disney Doodles
Wow, there all so cute and pretty! The lion king is my favorite Disney movie of all time so I adore the pictures of Simba as well as Simba and ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Bea: Prologue & Chapter One
Hey Babe, Loved it! Bea is really cute and funny! This reminds me of some one.... :P ! Anyway, I didn't see any spelling errors and grammar looks fine but ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Stevie
Wow! It's beautiful! What medium did you use? Acrylic? chalk? pastels? Whatever you used, there is really brilliant detail here! I love art but I'm not that good so I ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: I managed to get my drawings on, now I can rule the world!
It's very cute! Your fairy looks like she has ballet slippers on! I like her hair cut too!
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Running
Hello Ballet dancer, This is a beautiful piece! I love the metaphor of running! the man running away and the young boy running right in to it. I also loved ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: The Cold Moon [Prolouge]
Hello, It's a nice idea for an intro but executed poorly. Your ideas portrayed of vampires is way too stereotypical. Creating your own description of vampires would make it your ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Colorful Ballet
Hey Cute Ballet, As a ballerina myself I love how the ribbons are correct by their ankles not up to their knees! The bugs me very time I see it! ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Solace From The Shadows (Chapter 1)
Hey Dark Eyed Pixie, It was a really good start. After reading the intro (I guess that's what it is), I am pulled in. There where just few nitpicks but ...
Jun 22, 2009
