Awake

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Wow, this is tricky! P Sorry... I know it's lame but.... Poker Face by Lady Gaga

7.5/10 I like it, it's cute!

Very nicely done CuteBalletDancer7! They remind me of flowers. There's so much energy in the photos, you've really captured the electrical magic of the fire works! They are brilliant! Keep ...

Wow these are magnificent! They're beautiful! there's so much emotion in all the pictures and as CuteBalletDancer7 said the children look as if they have a connection in the photos! ...

I'd give it 8/10... it was good, really funny but not much meaning. I hope he shares his lunch :P just joking :)

Hello, Very nice! I am really glad that you shaded! It gives Anthro dimension, more animation! The red in his eyes could have been bolder or highlighted, to give him ...

Oh.... He/she is so cute! I just want to hug that fur..? is it fur? whatever is it, it looks so soft...t just like a puppy's coat!

Hello, First off, I am a huge fan of classical music, especially minor preludes! :) Then when you described his beautiful talent on the piano, well I fell in love! ...

Dreamful Reality Devoured by darkness My heart races and pounds in my ears I reel my heavy breath in my raw throat. Drenched and numb Screams and screeches all around ...

Jester, this is so deep. The opening statement Tears are of an international language could have never been so true. You challenge how simple and uncomplicated they can be then ...

Hello, This first chapter has a lot of potential. Aside from grammar or punctuation, you are still telling not showing and are really going far into detail of people and ...

Wow, Jester, wow! That is what I call adventure! It was so real! My heart was pumping the adrenaline rush as the countdown got closer and as the action escalated ...

That was beautiful! You used so much imagery in every thing - oh, it was magnificant! I could feel the helplessness and dispare and the isolation. Though I thought that ...

Yes, of course, sorry! I'll fix it! Thanks!