AutumnSun

I stare, stunned At the first message you write to me After... I don’t even know how long Enthralled, I began to type back Confused, I don’t know what to ...

We met during a humid, hot, heat wave Immediately enthralled Overcome with feelings, I write about you and talk about you and think about you We walk to the ocean ...

Kind of intense but simple in a way. I enjoyed it! The 4th part was my favorite although, I'm not sure why. It flowed so well! Very original.

I really enjoyed the last 4 sections. The beginning was not bad. I just think you tried too hard to rhyme. It is pretty good though. Most people your age ...

It's different, very original. Interesting style. I did enjoy it. I admit I was confused at first. It is a little dark then the last part is happy. I wonder ...

First of all, I liked it because it was unique. It's interesting how it is under romantic short stories but it feels so dark. At the same time, it doesn't. ...

It is sweet and simple. I don't think all songs and poems have to be intense. I think my heart aches to and my head says no should be out. ...

It was really deep. I liked the last 6 lines. It was such a shift, more dark and I didn't expect that. It actually works really well. I like it ...

Other than the spelling, It is a really great start! I can see it becoming an amazing song, actually! Yes, it's very rough now and that is obvious but it ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I have no interest in math or science. I think it is extremely difficult to write a poem with those terms but still sound interesting. ...

I would move mountains, trees and oceans I would do whatever I could To stop the world From turning and prevent the clock From stealing what time we have left ...

I used to hate the rain Now I've made friends with it I'm kinda used to standing in it At least it masks my tears Drops fall on my face, ...