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Hi :D You can review anything of mine, if you want. Revpire (;

That was really good, and yeah, like it was mentioned, dream scenes are usually very cliche. But you managed to pull it off, haha. It was a bit too realistic, ...

I really, really liked this. It's short but awesome :) "We're all mad here," says the cat, As he fades to nothing but a grin. Further down, We're falling fast ...

That's really cool. It pissed me off that she ended up getting caught, but I guess that's just the way of the story lol. Anyways, is this the first chapter? ...

JEEZ Olli! I was being in-character. An angry 14 year old boy. Go-osh. But thanks anyway :)

"Kadence, where's Kiyl?" "How would I know? you're his dad f'chrissakes," "Don't play that card again, Kadence. Where is he?" "I don't know dad, why don't you go see?" "You ...

I like it :) It's cool. Just because it doesn't make sense doesn't mean it's not any good, because it is. And it does make sense :D Haha to me ...

That was a really interesting prologue, I can't wait to actually read the first chapter! The only thing I could pick out there was in the first few sentences. Did ...

I really like this! Perhaps you could of extended a bit further, like, where was she? How old was she? Why was she there? Why was it happening, all that ...

Heeeeeeelloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. :)

Hi, welcome to YWS :)

Welcome to YWS :)

This is Biffle1's story, he just wanted me to post it for him ^^ As the world abandons me, I stalk my way around the city. Bright lights blind me ...

If writing could look stunning, it'd look like this, for sure. I absolutely loved this, the swearing definitely gave it an edge, which I extra liked. It was great imagery, ...

This sounds cool...write more!! Lol I thought this was Olli's...cuz he showed it to me first haha. Sorry this wasn't a very good review. There wasn't much to talk about, ...