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Zomg. This was scary. Haha. Very good story! I can't think of anything that needs to be changed or improved, because its already pretty darn good. The beginning of the ...

The wind seperates a seed and its flower, Lifting the seed with all its mighty power. I dunno, I don't really like this last sentence. "Mighty power" just really doesn't ...

There is a girl who is always great Her face always has a smile Her hair always look gorgeous She also has the cutest styles Everyone abselutely absolutely loves her ...

PLEASE READ THE PROLOGUE! OR YOU WILL NOT GET THE FIRST CHAPTER!!! Why don't you put in a link to the prologue? Some people are pretty lazy and wbf going ...

I am the wind, the rain, the fury of the night sky, the stars, the moon that shines when the sun doesn't I am the light, the shadows, the hurt ...

I really, really like this. In fact, it's probably the most enjoyable and interesting thing I've read on YWS. Honestly. I especially love how you've described Golden Boy, and you've ...

I really liked this. It had a cool ending, I could kind of guess it was going to happen though. Anyways, you might want to explain a teeny bit, why ...

Hehehahah you have 69 reviews so far :lol: I haven't written an introduction either, cuz I'm rather boring, too. Your family sounds mean :D (mean as in, cool :P Bahah) ...

This was really cool. The slang that Luke used put me off a bit, but mostly because I'm not really good at reading slang haha. Anyway, I'm no good at ...

Okay, well I couldn't really find much at fault with the story, it was a little confusing, but that's alright. As long as you sort of smooth out any introductions ...

I feel like critiquing both of your stories, the unrevised and the revised. :) Sorry if anything is particularly harsh. I took my last breath, the last gulp of air. ...

Hi, sorry that this might be a pointless review but I came across this chapter just now(I'll read the rest soon), and I wanted to ask about something. So, everything ...

Is this the end? Were we the cause of our demise? Are the answers just more questions? No. This is the end. We were the cause. We let them in. ...

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Hi, this was good, but I don't really get who 'he' is, and the whole 'sacrifice' thing. The dialogue get's a bit mixed up in the middle, for me at ...