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Re: Sickness
Good job! One thing, and I don’t know if this is right, but I thought nurses were girls. You referred to Gabriel as a nurse. The ending was very nice! ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Me...
Hello! :) I'm Sydney (aka a_kittens_claws) and I'm 13 years old and have been a YWS member since June of 2009. I love writing. You probably already know that because ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: I am planning to send this to two of my most loved! Review!
- I dream about them still being here and seeing my sister’s face again, my second mum too. I don't quite understand exactly how your sister and second mum have ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: The Ghost In My Bedroom
((lol yeah, I couldn't think of a better title, any suggestions?^^)) 'Corey,' The soft voice sang, 'Corey.' It wasn't going to lull me out. I hid beneath my blanket, shuddering ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: 9 Reasons For Tomorrow
1. Because the earth isn't spinning fast enough and I'm barely holding on to the soil dipping my toes in gorilla glue just to be safe to be attached to ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: If I
Suicide and Compromise, everything I refuse to hide, is showing...on your beautiful face. Lovers lost, the new holocaust. Something tells me I can't go on; without you. Gliding on this ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: The Hero
I was born of air. I'm not normal. And I won't pretend to be. I'm a Hero. And one day, when I'm well-known on YWS... I'll change my name to ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Me...
Hello! :) I'm Sydney (aka a_kittens_claws) and I'm 13 years old and have been a YWS member since June of 2009. I love writing. You probably already know that because ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Time
Mmmkay, so, this thought just randomly came into my head, and I decided to share. :D Tell me what you think. It's weird how time can connect us all. In ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Life of Kayla.. XxX blog
Let them sort it out themselves. Cut yourself out of the picture and ignore them for a while. As much as you'd love to be the peace maker, you can't-not ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Together, torn apart.
Pretty cool poem :P Together we stand, together we rise, as we see into our fiery demise. Your eyes, your face, I am in love, but now, you're pale, as ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: The Empty Lots
Oh my goodness. I loved this! Absolutely. And I couldn't find anything wrong with it :D The flow was perfect, and it gave off a great feeling towards the end. ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Mother Moon
There they were again. Lean and dark across my wall. I watched them with crazy fear. Each had their hands stretched out, testing. The silence almost seemed to be snickering. ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: A collection of poems
I rarely write poems so if you must tear it to shreds for my awful work please do. Untitled My angry thoughts are left to? ferment. My patients patience is ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Torture
I really liked this! I can totally relate to loud silence, it happens too often in my house TT_TT Anyways, I was slightly confused at how his flesh fell off ...
Mar 28, 2010
