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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Save me (prologue)

    Sounds cool, can't wait to read the rest!

    Sep 15, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Looking Glass Curse

    I didn't particularly like this story. Not because of how it was written, just these types of stories freak me out. It was good though. Will there be more? I ...

    Sep 15, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Voices Are Many

    I don't quite think this is entirely OCD. Sounds more skitzy then anything. This story scared the hell out of me, but it was well written. Good work!

    Sep 13, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Twilight Skies (R13 -Contains coarse language)

    I found this piece kind of boring. It was written okay, but there was no real pull. Sure, wings came at the end, but until then it was really just ...

    Sep 11, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: My Blood, My Truth - Chap. 1

    Amazing work, absolutely amazing. Wish I could write like this. WOW. Where'd you get the inspiration? Anyways, I'm not very good at nitpicking, soo I'll just say how much I ...

    Sep 11, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Lost

    This seems to be a nicely written story. However I have noticed like many others the lacking of punctuation and grammar. This piece appears to be a rough draft, some ...

    Sep 6, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Dreamless

    This is one of the most strangest stories I have ever read. But how jealous I am to not have thought of it myself. It is brilliant and confusing and ...

    Sep 6, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Abusing your Muse

    My muse has never left my side. It comes up with about 50 different ideas every minute. Really, it does all the work. All I do is type...

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Arian (a sort've long short story)

    I'm not really good at nit-picking, so I'll just tell you how much I loved this story. Your characters were good, however there could be a bit more development in ...

    Aug 31, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: A Harry Potter Parody

    Very funny! Will you continue this? I hope you 'cos I'd definitely read more.

    Aug 30, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Miracles

    So this idea came to me through, believe it or not, a butterfly. It landed on my window and I captured it. Then my cat got it and was chewing ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Entry for ThornedRose's contest~

    This is for ThornedRose's worst piece of literature contest. Prepare for it! Kelly lived in a small house down a lane nearby a school called Daisys. She had two best ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Alone and Solo

    Wow, amazing mindset. Love this poem, it's almost professional. You've got good imagery, and a good ability to make people think in-depth.

    Aug 27, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Do You Remember?

    Brilliantly written, I think. I love the beginning description and overall the idea is very mystical and cute at the same time. I believe you should extend it, I would ...

    Aug 27, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: How to Live - Chapter One

    Ah, I would hate to go to a shrink, too... stupid people trying to mess with my head. The above response is a compliment to your writing by the way. ...

    Aug 27, 2009


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