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Re: Save me (prologue)
Sounds cool, can't wait to read the rest!
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: The Looking Glass Curse
I didn't particularly like this story. Not because of how it was written, just these types of stories freak me out. It was good though. Will there be more? I ...
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: The Voices Are Many
I don't quite think this is entirely OCD. Sounds more skitzy then anything. This story scared the hell out of me, but it was well written. Good work!
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Skies (R13 -Contains coarse language)
I found this piece kind of boring. It was written okay, but there was no real pull. Sure, wings came at the end, but until then it was really just ...
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: My Blood, My Truth - Chap. 1
Amazing work, absolutely amazing. Wish I could write like this. WOW. Where'd you get the inspiration? Anyways, I'm not very good at nitpicking, soo I'll just say how much I ...
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: Lost
This seems to be a nicely written story. However I have noticed like many others the lacking of punctuation and grammar. This piece appears to be a rough draft, some ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Dreamless
This is one of the most strangest stories I have ever read. But how jealous I am to not have thought of it myself. It is brilliant and confusing and ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Abusing your Muse
My muse has never left my side. It comes up with about 50 different ideas every minute. Really, it does all the work. All I do is type...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: Arian (a sort've long short story)
I'm not really good at nit-picking, so I'll just tell you how much I loved this story. Your characters were good, however there could be a bit more development in ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: A Harry Potter Parody
Very funny! Will you continue this? I hope you 'cos I'd definitely read more.
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: Miracles
So this idea came to me through, believe it or not, a butterfly. It landed on my window and I captured it. Then my cat got it and was chewing ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Entry for ThornedRose's contest~
This is for ThornedRose's worst piece of literature contest. Prepare for it! Kelly lived in a small house down a lane nearby a school called Daisys. She had two best ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Alone and Solo
Wow, amazing mindset. Love this poem, it's almost professional. You've got good imagery, and a good ability to make people think in-depth.
Aug 27, 2009 -
Re: Do You Remember?
Brilliantly written, I think. I love the beginning description and overall the idea is very mystical and cute at the same time. I believe you should extend it, I would ...
Aug 27, 2009 -
Re: How to Live - Chapter One
Ah, I would hate to go to a shrink, too... stupid people trying to mess with my head. The above response is a compliment to your writing by the way. ...
Aug 27, 2009
