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Kinda stumped on what to say. I've never read such a short story that left me feeling like this. I can't really associate a single emotion to your piece, so ...

Wow, I really loved this piece. And you wrote it when you were 12? Impressive. I tell this to everybody I critique, but anyways, I'm not good with nitpicking, so ...

I really liked this prologue! Obviously it is something to do with vampires, but like someone else said, they're not all sparkly and such. It seems like you've got a ...

Thanks for the reviews... Yeah Idk where I got Starla from, it just like came into my head. I'll change it to Stella. And I thought maybe forbid was forbade, ...

Wow, lucky much Angel of Death!? :P

Kinda evil and morbid, but hey I quite like the evil and morbid. It flows really well and I love the choice of words you've used. Basically it was very ...

I'll happily review anything right now. I'm not very good at pointing out the minor quibs; I prefer to critique the depth, plot and characters of a story. I am ...

And Here's Thinking You Were Gone. I never expected to drop like this. My wings were always working, keeping me up amongst the clouds. Then with one small mistake, the ...

Man, you can really feel the pain and anger from this song. Well written, you could perhaps break it up into verses, it would be easier to read also. I ...

I like the wings and the theme of this picture, however the head, like many others have noticed, appears to be tilted to the side and one of the eyes ...

Pretty =D Love the reflection.

but hands can't reverse hours become perverse This poem is good apart from these two lines. I don't think "perverse" is quite the word you are looking for. Sure it ...

I'm kinda crappy at critiquing and at poetry, too. But I rather liked your one :) Good work!

Ooh interesting! A very good beginning, I hope to read more of this...

Very interesting, I def wanna read more! It's some what a bit rushed at the beginning, but it ends very well. Are you gonna continue it? I hope so, cos ...