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Awh, this was really cute. Quite a clever idea, really. Big ups for originality, too. Not much to say about it in-depth, but overall it was a nice read.

If people wanted to hold hands and sing "Kumbaya" in a big circle, she was not getting involved. Frickin hilarious xD Haha good work for such a short piece^^ Not ...

And nobody stepped out to listen From under the shadowy trees. The second line doesn't really fit. Listen and trees don't exactly rhyme, and if you weren't looking to rhyme, ...

Okay um, this was a random idea of a story that I created yesterday. It's totally unplanned (I don't plan my work xD) so I'm just going with the flow. ...

Actually, this topic (along with the song Innocent by Our Lady Peace) just got me to create something in my head. Hence is born, FACEMAP. [3 brothers in Australia.] Skye(15) ...

Gah! I'm late once again, and it seems as if all the nitpicking has been done. So far, I think your story is pretty good. The whole almost-breaking-her-hand thing is ...

Well, you have a LOT of spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes in this chapter. I would go through it all, but seeing as you have already gotten some reviews on ...

Hey, I got your message. I really like this one. The first one was a bit too short, and this one's just fine. Very interesting. I'm not really sure what ...

Here in this street , everything’s the same. Here in this street, people treat me with respect. People are afraid of me. Here in this street , everyone’s the same. ...

Hmm, either I'm late to review this or heaps of people really like this piece, too. Anyway, I haven't really got much to critique you on, seeing as so many ...

10 points for uniqueness! Way to go haha

Marleigh is another cool way to spell your name. Tbh, I rather prefer Marley over Marlie, but it's your name. Skinny jeans=love. And you took my closet? Rude! I now ...

And we can see for miles (and miles). All the way across the Sound – I liked that bit, dunno why. It just sounds nice. This sounds kinda like a ...

The dusty, rickety old window gave a suitable view of the world below my feet. The sun made everything seem golden and nice. I could hear the children running and ...

It's pretty random. But who knows, some times random ideas become the best stories.