Auteur

I never imagined these thoughts would trouble my most internal organs. This opening line doesn't really suit for me. Like, it's too long and sort of detailed compared to the ...

Hiii :) Would you mind reviewing this for me: It's "The Crossfire" and it's a short fiction...aaand. If you wanted...you could review anything else of mine? Hahah. Thanks again, bye!

Hi. Sorry this isn't going to be a very important or good review, so you can just...not take any notice of it. Anyways, I really liked this! I don't know ...

-- Yeah, so. Please just tell me what you think of it overall, the emotions you picked up off of it, how you felt...all that. I guess nitpicks are okay, ...

Apparently I need to work on the quality of my reviews, but other words, they're crap. So sorry if mine sucks. lead here in the ditches fighting for too long ...

Thanks guys XD

I Am From... I am from peanut butter and bacon grease and the old wooden tree house. I really like this opening sentence. Idk why, it's just really...welcoming? :) I ...

Yeah...hope you enjoy. :) * * Daddy, do you know me? I think we've met before. Daddy, do you remember me? I sincerely hope you do. Daddy, do you like ...

Lol, I really don't know...I guess this is just like, all my thoughts sort of rolled into some sort of story? Yeah, well. I'm not that bothered about it. Tear ...

There is not much to critique on this. It's really good, for a not-poet that is. :P I could only advise to make it longer, but you said you would ...

Thanks, but really? Aleysha is that hard to pronounce/read? El-ee-sha. Like Aleisha...

This was really cool! I didn't seem to find anything wrong with it, but I'll leave the nitpicking to the better reviewers. Anyways, this was...this was good. I loved the ...

Euh, parce que je suis en train de parler français pour Dalliance. Comme une blague, ce qui est. Je lui ai dit que j'allais prendre la parole tout en français ...

"It was nothing babe, I didn't even mean for it to happen." If only i

Hi, could you please review this: Thanks :)