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I love this piece, for some reason it reminded me of angels. Anyways, keep up the good work. Nothing I think you could, or should, change. It's bravo. Brilliant.:D

Erm, just to note, there's no way I feel like this. I just love taking different perspectives, and this is a subject that interests me highly. PLEASE don't read this ...

Anyone who says snazzy is well, er...snazzy. Welcome to the site, hope to see ya around.

Hi BlueShift, I really liked this story, however short it was. I have noticed that 'hope' and 'faith' and all that is recently becoming quite written about on YWS. Anyways, ...

Confusing but likewise, very well described.

I see the field now with the golden sun, the kid in the grass, the blood on him. I absolutely love this little bit here. It's so sad but...lifting, sorta? ...

Love it. Rap is my favorite, and I would definitely love to hear this some time on the radio. Go for it!

*claps* Pretty mask!

Hey! I really liked this. I'm not sure what to critique you on because in my opinion everything was just fine. You gave just the right amount of descriptions and ...

Why should you feel shy? Gosh I just love sharing my work on YWS^^ It's because I know I've written something good (usually), and I believe that people will like ...

Chapter 3 is up^^ If you are new to this sort-of story, then please read chapter's 1 and 2. Once again I'll review a piece of your work if you ...

I've got to agree with Pudin, if you ever published a book, I'd definitely be one of the first to buy it^^ I love the way you wrote this, and ...

If you haven't read the first chapter, please do. I will give you a review back in return for a review of this or the first chapter. Just PM me ...

Wow, nice imagery^^ It really does grab my attention, the beginning is a little boring, particularly because I don't care much for the small houses or barracks. The end is ...

I agree with fading-dream. It had potential but it was kind of boring. It had my interest at first, but then it ended up no-where. Slightly confusing, it did seem ...