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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Look What You've Done

    Thanks Kayla :D

    Feb 1, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Decided. part 1 of chapter 1

    Hey Kayla :) Sorry it took me so long to review lol. Anyway, I wont bother with spelling and stuff, so I'll just go ahead and say I liked this ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Heaven and Hell (not fixed title)

    Hello. The bit about the girl in the hallway is interesting, and I want to read more about that. As for the ending, the only bit I didn't really like ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Freedom

    My name is Alaska. For three years I had been locked inside a tiny room. I was only fourteen when They took me; all for a stupid little robbery that ...

    Jan 29, 2010
  • Other Re: Strengthening Your Hands for Good

    I found this really interesting. It was good, and it was also hopeful for the rest of the world who aren't yet on their way to God's Kingdom, because it ...

    Jan 29, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: .

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    Jan 29, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The River That Weeps.

    My stuff will be in italics, kay? The brittle stones in the cree were moving ever so softly. The moss above the surfacewas turning brown as the water sarted to ...

    Jan 29, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: .

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    Jan 28, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: What music inspires you to write the most?

    I find that I can't write anything meaningful without music blaring in my ears. Usually it's just sad, inspiring stuff. So what helps you write your best? Please write down ...

    Dec 21, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Fall from Grace

    I really love it. It makes me feel so sad, which is good. Well done! You could have also explained a bit more about the alive Charlie, and how he ...

    Dec 21, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Look What You've Done

    Okay this is my entry for Forestqueen808's contest. The song that inspired it was called Look What You've Done by Jet. I know that this isn't the actual meaning behind ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: City Lights

    Really liked this. Good job!

    Nov 22, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: P.C. Marcs chapter 2

    I preferred the first chapter, to be honest. Are you gonna add anything to this? Cos it's remarkably small. It doesn't seem to be going anywhere either, so try and ...

    Nov 22, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Suicide

    I really liked this story. I think I've read it before but never commented on it. So now I am! I'm not gonna bother commenting on the negatives, but I ...

    Nov 16, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Coming to terms. (Glimmer)

    Quite an interesting read. It sounds more sci-fi/star trek than fantasy with the whole saber thing, and the kissing bit struck me with surprise. I really wasn't expecting this to ...

    Nov 15, 2009


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