Auteur

It's good. The dog suddenly showing up is a little random, but yeah it's okay. To be honest, this story is a bit too trying to be an emo romance, ...

Haha it's funny as, this is the second parody of Twilight I've read, and I love it...was this based on that stalker chick who went out to dinner with Edward ...

Ahahaahahahahahahaha, this is an awesome remake. I'd buy this in a shop! Hahaha, it's brilliant. Lol, good work.

Yeah, I deliberately capitalized door :) Thanks for the review.

Continue it more Olli! Haha it's good. Or actually, you should add more in the beginning and have what you've got now as the ending. O: xo

I really liked this. There were a few minor spelling errors, but other than that, it was a cool concept on the whole issue of love. I like the title, ...

Hmm, it was good. I loved the sudden change in the middle of the story, the sentence 'And then I realize what I've done' was a very good turn of ...

"What's inside that room, Karm?" I asked, my eyes peering over the couch towards the Door at the end of the hall. Karman's eyes didn't move from the TV. "Nothing ...

Auteur, you out do yourself with every new peice. Splendiferous (good) olli Thanks Olli :) xo

Hmm I like it. Haha mostly cuz I write stuff like this but yeah, it's cool. Like the person before said, proably give it a bit more of a backdrop, ...

I liked this, nice emotion to it. But you might want to make it a bit longer, perhaps describe a bit more who it was that was hitting her, why ...

Lol Olli yesh it was on purpose , and CHUR Kayla :) I love your writing , too .

I really liked this! I like writing about this sort of stuff, and your imagery in this piece was brilliant! I especially liked the sentence 'Now I stood here the ...

Hi. I like this poem. I'm not gonna bother with any of the spelling or grammatical stuff so I'll just say that perhaps you could make it a little longer, ...

I love it. :D