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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: delete please.

    Thanks guys :) And The.Dreamwalker, yeah, I can't really be bothered using proper punctuation/grammar with any poems I come up with xP But thank you :)

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Cannot Forget

    "I simply miss you. A breeze cannot carry me into your arms. My knives to the side & your bombs returned, I'm ready if you are." I LOVE that stanza! ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: delete please.

    delete.

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Superman

    Ndaww thank you guys! :D And rothwise, "My lips?" was like, a sort of... questioning thing. Like, doubting if his lips were going to be mine, so to speak ;) ...

    Jan 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: free

    empty answers empty hearts I cannot see It is too dark You say something I heard you speak I try to listen I try to reach if you expect so ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Superman

    Aww, thank you! ^ Haha :)

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Superman

    Haha PaperNessa, it's because the guy I'm talking about lives near me. :) Not with me... hahaha. Thanks for the comment anyways ^~^ Same to you Geronimo.

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Ladybug

    Helllooo. Firstly, I enjoyed reading this, but there's just a few things that I noticed, which I will point out for you. Ellie approached Travis with caution in the summer ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Superman

    I miss you. I miss knowing you were only a walk away. I miss being able to wake up and see your face. Your lovely face. Blue-green eyes the size ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: His Family Picture

    First grade class Crayons on paper Instructions to draw A family picture... Already, this poem has my attention. Weelll done. :D The teacher stops Sits next to him Quietly asks ...

    Nov 11, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sorry

    Saying sorry doesn't mean anything to me. I like this opening line. :) Sorry doesn't make the world a better place, to live or to stay. Hmm, for this, I ...

    Nov 11, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Left to Die

    Another old write. I have no name I am but a ghost For no one see's me Even as I lie here Among the crowds I see the faces Drifting ...

    Nov 11, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Creative Writing.. Please read :)

    Okay so basically it's just a short piece between two characters, 250-350 words. It's gotta be about an incident... and this is pretty much what I wrote. I need to ...

    Sep 16, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The People of Heaven

    I liked this (: I'm Christian but I don't find this offending at all. It's completely true, well most of it. I loved the entire poem. How did you come ...

    Jul 11, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I'm Sorry

    Two words were all I had. Brilliant opening line (; But I knew it was not enough. Three times you told me so, and I shall never forget. Many thing ...

    Jul 5, 2010


You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man.
— Dallas Winston, The Outsiders