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Re: Alfred Symon's Critic Clinic: Bringing Smiles since the 60's
Hi! I would love it if you could take a look at my short story. It's in three parts, because I've found a lot of text is hard to read ...
Aug 24, 2012 -
Re: Online Publication; need help!
It's a great site, LoudMouth, good luck with it! Maybe search out kids you know like to write, or to read, and offer them a position. Put an ad on ...
Aug 22, 2012 -
Re: What's the most beautiful word? Thoughts?
Hope. Because it makes me think of a little bird (Hope Is the Thing with Feathers) and because there are few things in the world as powerful as hope. It ...
Aug 22, 2012 -
Re: Need A Review? [Closed-Yet to open]
Hi! My short story is posted in three parts, but altogether its not hugely long (4,000 words). I would love, love, love it if you could read all three, but ...
Aug 22, 2012 -
Re: Twit's Scratch and Tear
Hi! My story is The Devil In the Wishing Well, but it's in three parts. It's not hugely long altogether (almost 4,000 words) and I would really, really appreciate it ...
Aug 22, 2012 -
Re: Is my idea too complicated? (feedback please)
Personally, I love it! As long as the "is" and the "could have been" is clearly separated (or maybe not, depending on how you want to tell the story), I ...
Aug 19, 2012 -
Re: Short Stories Idea - Thoughts?
I agree with Rosey Unicorn. I love, love, love it when authors have extra content on books, and its also a good way for a reader to decided whether or ...
Aug 19, 2012 -
Re: Guess the Number: Win Reviews!
19. There's just something I like about that number. Devilishly handsome, it is :)
Aug 19, 2012 -
Re: Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Adventure Post here for detailed reviews.
Hi! I need a review for my fantasy short story. I'm submitting it for a contest at the end of the month and I need constructive feedback. It's in three ...
Aug 19, 2012 -
Re: Request Reviews Here!
Hi! I have a short story I'm submitting for a contest at the end of the month and I really, really need some constructive criticism on it, especially on characterization, ...
Aug 19, 2012 -
Re: What's everyone reading?
American Gods - Neil Gaiman. For school. I think I love my summer reading list :D Sadly, it's long and I started later and there's no time for another book.
Aug 19, 2012 -
Re: All my ideas revolve around the same theme...
I've noticed that too, similar themes cropping up in lots of different ideas. I think its a good thing. It lets you explore the theme in different stories, with different ...
Aug 16, 2012 -
Re: Walker's reviews
Will you review my poem for me please? Thanks! Congrats on the Featured Member, by the way.
May 6, 2011 -
Re: The Girl with Flowers in Her Hair
I'm a little rusty with poetry, but I don't hate this. It doesn't read as smoothly as I would like it, and has had very little editing. I want to ...
May 6, 2011
