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Re: Untitled story chapter 1
Sorry, but I couldn't go through the whole story in one review. I filled up a notepaper of editing points though. So first things first: Grammar. You probably didn't read ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Reading
Thanks for the review! I'll get to those grammar errors! ~Audrey718~
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 1
Well the other reviewer took my editing job. :P Laugh Out Loud. So that leaves me to do the complementing! It was a great story. So detailed! At first, I ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: With an Open Heart
That is an awesome drawing. It really shows your overall theme of innocence. Wish I could draw that well! Beautiful demension as well! Audrey718
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: A Hopeless Romantic and Hating It: Chapter 1
Ok. I'm going to give you honest feedback, and I hope it isn't to harsh to you. First, it's a really good start for you romance novel. Ok, now for ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Reading
This is my first poem: Reading is my life, My everyday activity Every morning, day, and night I keep a book somewhere near A new world waiting to be discovered ...
Nov 4, 2011