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Re: Pranks
So, here is my short story Pranks. I kind of twisted the meaning of 'pranks.' Hehe. James threw on his backpack, and jumped into the front passenger’s seat of his ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Romance Story Started
Hello! Ok, before you read this, I want you to know two things: 1st, I've never been in love before. 2nd, This is my first romance. So all in all, ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Heroes and Demons (Chapter 1)
Hooked. As simple as that one word: hooked. This is a wonderful start. There weren't any really noticable grammarical errors, and it was so interesting and wonderful to read! I ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Butterfly on the Floor (Prologue)
Wow. Beautiful. I love the sadness in the story and small glimpse of hope. I will be reading Chapter 1 when it comes out! Great description. Only, I would like ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: A Nameless Bit of Poetry
Beautiful piece. Not that I'm an expert poet or anything, but I liked it. I didn't see any grammar faults and it flowed very nicely. What was your main theme ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Cuts.
Ok, I'm no romance story expert, but I like it. It was well thought up and beautifully written. It makes you think really deeply about love. What is true love? ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Bloody Angel: Prologue
Well. It's okay. It doesn't have enough description for my taste. It only tells you whats happening. I can't imagine what's happening. I'm not in your character's shoes. And talking ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Demon- Prologue
I love it. It is really good. I love that this is just all on how Carter thinks. I read the spoiler after i read the story. I'm guessing that ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
My Boyfriend (Big Time Rush) Never actually had a boyfriend.
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Copy Copy
This is a great story Jazz! Is there more to it? It seems that you really left the reader hanging there, with your ending. Anyway, I love the large amount ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Cholerparagon - Profile
That was an awesome dragon! I have a story called the Baby Dragon. If you like stories, you might want to read it!
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
That was awesome. I love it. PERIOD. I love it and that is all there is to it. I will be reading the first chapter when it comes out, or ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Baby Dragon
Here is the main plot of the story. A rare ruby dragon (Anloric) ventures into the human world after feeling like he was kicked out of his own world and ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Pirate Skull
You drew that?! :O Wow, that is really good especially with the shadows and everything! Awesome drawing!
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: An Ethereal Being
Very nice. I like it and have no bad comments about it! Great Job, and i hope to read some more wonderful poems by you! Audrey718
Nov 4, 2011