Audrey718

Hello. I've been on here for about a month now. Just wanted to say hello. :) I'm mostly a fiction/fantasy writer, but am now trying my hand at many other ...

Fantasy, Romance, Dark, Action/Adventure, and Other. :) I like to write a large variety of genres.

It was nice. A couple of grammar errors. It was a bit too long, for my tastes, but it was a good plot line and everything. You did quite a ...

This is awesome!!!! I LOVE it. It has a bit to much romance for me right now, so it would be nice if you toned it down a bit, but ...

That is beautiful. Her look and pose is worth way more than even 100,000 words. The color is so vivid. You definitely have a lot of artisitc talent!

Ok. I saw that a lot of people edited your story a bit. Sadly, I caught a lot more grammar errors. So here we go: "Dam" is technically spelled "Damn" ...

I'm not poet, so i cannot really help you, but I love the theme in it. It really flows well and the ryhme scheme gives a very nice rythem. Great ...

Very nice. I really enjoyed it. For a 15 minute poem, this is very very well written!

I love theses 'appetizers!' They are just great--giving you just a bite of a story. Leaving you there hoping for more. Are you doing any more? This is just so ...

This is great! I love how it gives the facts, but still captures you! Also, welcome to YWS! What a great story! I look forward to reading more on it!

Hello! This is a WONDEFUL start. I love the way you just pulled me right into the story. Umm, you could maybe separate the paragraphs a little bit more instead ...

I'm not a poet, or that old, but I like it. It's a very emotional poem, but nice. You did a great job with it!

Very nicely written. you include yur feelings, setting, and characters very well. Great job!

This is great! Beautifully done! The theme is beautiful and clear in the picture. Your a great artist!

Thank you, and thank you! I'm fixing those errors now! :)