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Hey! So I think your character has a good solid voice and all, with the "yeah,yeah poor kid" part, so that is really good, but overall, you just need to ...

Hello! So I figured I would review this, since I loved the song so much. ^.^ I really think this has an interesting plot. Father abandons family for his big ...

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Hey back again! This rewrite is leaps and bound better! You kept us in the action, the ending was fantastic, your characterization of the master was very well-done. You didn't ...

Hello! I actually started this review a week ago, only finishing it now. Sorry >.< I love ninjas, I know almost nothing about them though, even so, this piece is ...

Hello! Wow, this is an interesting interpretation of the prompt, I really think it something worth exploring. I always find it extremely interesting how someone with agoraphobia/msyophobia is able to ...

So this isn't exactly a bug, but I was uncertain with where to post it. The review team page's points per person breakdown is incorrect. At least on my screen, ...

Hello! So I must confess, this is my second time reading this piece. The language you use really is beautiful, it's the kind of writing you just want to read ...

Hey! So I think your dealing with a very powerful subject here, hate crimes and discrimination. It's definitly something that is very emotional, so heart-wrentching, purely awful. The idea that ...

Hello! Back again for another review, hope you don't mind. ^.^ As I have said, I think you have a fantastic premise. It is interesting to see how your MC ...

Hello! Thought I'd come by and review this! So your premise is interesting. Something happened to your MC, something bad that somehow relates to this Josh character, and now your ...

Heya! Alright, so I liked this. I am a fan of dramatic pieces, and it does not get more dramatic then death does it? =) The blue blood thing is ...

Hey Jenthura! I really liked this. I loved the whole atmosphere of it. The strange planet, the new technology, your characters, the sphere. You did a really good job creating ...