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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Sleep Now My Child

    Damn, this is really good. I'm trying to maintain a distinct voice while at the same time covering a broad range of emotions. ^ I thought you did that perfectly; ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Swimming Against the Kolyma River

    I really liked this; you have a talent for creating a scene and drawing a reader in. I only have a few comments. First of all, is this about the ...

    Feb 27, 2010


Remember: the plot is nothing more than footprints left in the snow after your characters have run by on their way to incredible destinations.
— Ray Bradbury