Attolia

To name a few to start off with: The Princess Bride The Godfather The Godfather Part II Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon (in Mandarin only, not dubbed) 2.Mathilda (My first-ever English ...

Aaww, good! About time! Two chapters ago when Henri was at school, all I was thinking was poor Henri! And what a jerk is your protagonist. (By the way, what's ...

Woah, that's some intense stuff. But you dove into that way too quickly. We never even got a chance to really meet Jenny (and I did go back and read ...

Sorry, I don't feel like going back to find and read the first four chapters, so I don't know how it ties into the rest of the story or anything. ...

Huh. Why does he have to wait till midnight, and if he wants to hurt her, why does he attempt to do it in such an unreliable way? But don't ...

Hey, I'm Attolia. So I'm not sure how I feel about the first part, starting off with the three types of Christmases, though I do really like your style. And ...

Wow, Navita. No wonder you won the contest. You've given me enough amazing reviews that it's only time I attempt to return the favor. If I ever get anything published, ...

Yeah, the finale was weak. The black smoke deserved a better ending than that, too. And I used to love Jacob, but after the episode with him and his brother ...

Hey! Great continuation with the story. But she had a heart shaped face, the minute you saw them you couldn't be mistaken. I think you mean "it" instead of "them"? ...

Lauren, Kitty, Skins, Areida, Zankoku - thank you all so, so much! You guys have no idea how helpful your comments have been. I have edited it to use all ...

Hey, Canislupis. I like your reviews. I often find myself reviewing a piece after you and agreeing with almost everything you said. So I'd love to get your thoughts on ...

Note: this is rated 16+. It contains strong, derogatory language and some mature content. I came up with this story plot when pondering how to address a contest prompt. I'm ...

Canislupis did a great job covering all the nitpicks in her review, so I'm just going to tell you the stuff that I don't like. The people passing in the ...

I'm am so with you on loving the ocean. I have basically grown up in the ocean and the water as well. :) This was a good piece. You can ...

Heyy. Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this. Anyway, I really like your writing. This first thing I noticed about this story was that the MC's name ...