Attolia

I read your other version and am happy to say I like this one WAY better - mostly due to the way you changed her perspective so that now she ...

A million apologies. I swear I'm getting worse, right? But in my defense, I do have my reasons; I graduated this week and had neither the time nor the mental ...

Angels - that is so cool you got to go to Kauai! The pics are beautiful. My family isn't at all rich, but my parents are in love with Hawaii ...

So, I actually liked this a lot. It was a pretty intriguing start; I've very interested to know the story behind her and her sisters and what they were made ...

I LOVE Bohemian Rhapsody, too. :) Great topic, by the way. 70's music is by far the best of any decade, so wish I could've lived back then. I'd have ...

Tool Led Zeppelin Queens of the Stone Age System of a Down Rolling Stones Sublime A Perfect Circle Sublime is my all-time favorite band, ever. Freaking Bradley Nowell had to ...

Hey Lena, haven't seen you in a while. This isn't going to be a very good or lengthy critique, partly cause I don't feel like it and mostly because this ...

Hey Wheadee. So... drug dealers. That's pretty tough stuff to write. I can't really get a feel of your MC right now; he seems too contradictory. You didn't make him ...

Pretty much just anything produced in the 2000's, except for some reggae and sca bands. New music just sucks, in my opinion. Almost every other decade had wayyy better music ...

Coco - Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad to know that you still enjoyed this, without having read the first two, and that you like the characters. And ...

Hey there. This was pretty good for an 11 year old. "Uh-oh... OK Rachael prepare yourself. Usually when she calls from the bathroom you get traumatized greatly." Rachael said, remembering ...

Hey canislupis, Thank you again for all the reviews. I really did not think I'd have chapter three up this fast, but here it is I'd love it if you ...

Hey Heather, Thank you so much for reviewing chapter two of my story! Really, it means a lot and helps a lot. I just posted chapter three, and would love ...

Hey everyone. First two chapters here and here. -------- “Of course, everyone knows Madame Verdon is simply a dreadful hostess,” said Madame Breton, as she sat with a few others ...

Heyyy. Sorry for getting here so late, and my apologies in advance cause I don't think this will be a very lengthy review - but that's because I'm having trouble ...