Attolia

It's kind of rough, but be brutal. Well-dressed figures swirled in the ballroom, for the moment careless to the events occurring in the world outside. Merry music resonated from musicians ...

I'm purposely not describing the people much, but tell me if you like how that works or not. Also, do you think overall it works as a prologue? Would you ...

Hey everyone. So this is the second chapter of my story, first chapter can be found here:post679790.html#p679790You don't really need to read the first chapter, though it would help.It's kind ...

Hey everyone. First two chapters here and here.post679790.html#p679790topic63494.html-------- “Of course, everyone knows Madame Verdon is simply a dreadful hostess,” said Madame Breton, as she sat

So I edited the last chapter to make Adele appear less weak; I hadn't realized how weak she seemed. And then I edited it for a number of other things ...