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Re: On the edge of Time
Your poem here has some very outstanding imagery. The world fell into an interminable winter A spirit that is as old as a guiding star a pulsing heat radiated through ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Baltimore
If I could leave to Baltimore tonight, Texas would never see me again. You see we wrap ourselves up in thought. We wrap ourselves up in the hope of people ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Shore line.
Hey guys! Sorry I never got back to reply on this. I haven't been on this in awhile. So let me just start by saying thank you so so so ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: The ghost above us.
Thank you very much! And I'm aware of the over use of the word "I've", but this was intentional. If you ever seen the Declaration of Independence, our founding fathers ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: The ghost above us.
The ghost above us whispers vague words. Stories about towers tall. Stories about a rise and fall. He talks about an Emperor. He talks about an Empire. He mumbles on ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: The Truth.
Thanks a lot! I really liked all your thoughts, and how you reformed my sentences to flow better. I wrote this really fast, and I didn't go back to look ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Behemoth
Wow this is amazing, keep up the great work. Never let your creative talent go to waste man! Can't wait to see more from you.
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: The Truth.
The truth: Like a cold steel cylinder, hammer, powder, and lead. Pressed and pointed at the back of my head. “You can have any boy you want, so why would ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Shore line.
On the island it was just you and I. I was the only one around. When I saw the wave come crashing down. I watched it sweep you out to ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: I Wouldn't Change You
Hello best friend! Glad you joined this freakin' sweet site.:D You're little piece here has really inspired me to write again! I love the contrast of love and hate and ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: One word.
Thanks everyone, I know it's not poetry I didn't see the "other poetry" option. My bad.
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: One word.
If you're looking for quick love, just find Insecurity, and loneliness. If you're looking for something more, Good luck. If you wouldn't mind leave me a comment in one word ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Iris. And the story after.
Thanks, I know it was vague, and this was just a very very rough draft. I worked on it for maybe an hour max. I'll do some fixing up, and ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Life In the Eyes Of a Godless Man
:o I like I like. :D this was a great piece.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Iris. And the story after.
She exhaled heavy, from what felt like the very bottom of her lungs. I could feel the look in her eyes. Pain. Remorse. And the closest to home, honesty. This ...
Oct 13, 2010
