AtticusGallows

It's really funny how you pointed out the two things I also thought were stupid. I will get rid of She/he cause I didn't like it, and the Angel part ...

I really liked this piece! It was fun to read, and I'm glad you had fun writing it! Cause that's what writing is all about:D I saw your stanza, but ...

This is a very interesting piece. I like near the end with the repetition of the, "Hanging Garden" and how everything is sown up at the end. Great job keep ...

Have you ever seen someone you’ve never met, and instantly started fantasizing about how this one person could fill every void in your life? You start telling yourself this stranger ...

If you’re here I’d always let you have my pillow. When I lay down to sleep your scent lingers. A lot of time has gone past, the palms in your ...

Hah well I was going to post the stanzas on the page and include a link, but that didn't really work out. :D I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for ...

The file got eased on Microsoft word, and I'm not really in the mood to retype it so just check it out in the link.

Whooo! Thank you everyone for the words and thoughts, it means a lot! I will take this piece back to the lab, and try to finish it soon. :D

As the two review above claim this is really a breathe of fresh air, seems like a picked a good morning to poke my head around YWS I'm finding a ...

This is absolutely amazing, it's kinda rare I come across something that makes me actually tear up. Your rhyme scheme, the way you tie in personal details about her, just ...

I love short and amazing poems like these. Very well constructed:D. I hope whatever had you down for so long is in your past, and you have all the strength ...

It's 5:00 a.m in Texas. I'm half asleep writing. So this hasn't been edited, and not really finished. It kinda flew out of my mouth so I just wrote it ...

Thanks a lot Ink that really means a lot to me!:D I'm glad you liked the link cause I didn't really know how people would respond, let a lone actually ...

At the hands of shaking youth. Prestigious young truth. Mountains moved, Tides withdrew, and Nature flew. We are the crawling blind. The places of our travels undefined. We are the ...

Hey thanks a lot! :D I really loved your review, and I will be making changes soon.