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Sorry for being hard telle, but... 1st one: Way too bright you should darken it from the edges, since you said you added the effect i expect you should know ...

It's a good drawing, or as you saw "doodle". It needs a bit of fixing such as, her right hand. I don't know of you mean you draw it crooked ...

I never write peons only stories and books.. i need help in writing peoms.. can someone like.. perhaps teach me? I have read some of the peoms on the site ...