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Here is the second part of my story, ENJOY! Its not very long, but reasonable. ================================================= Chapter 2 Jason had nothing to say, and even if he did it would ...

Lol, thanks, my only goal is to entertain :D

This is a poem i make when i was bored so its not my best, but it was my weirdest, and funniest. Rhyming my sound off, but at least it ...

Wow! Thanks! Harsh, but useful.

What about now? I changed it for you, lol, although the way i normally wrote it was understandable.

I'm not a good reviewer, but when i reached to the word Poop-head, i laughed my head off :D

My second poem ever! Don't be too harsh! =========================================== She lay beside me, completely flat on the bed, With her memorizing body, and her silky brown hair. My ground-breaki

Thanks Mo! Love the reveiw! Yeppers Peppers! lo0ol!

It was confusing a bit, but i got it in the end.. This man's got talent for writing poems and stuff.

I never write peons only stories and books.. i need help in writing peoms.. can someone like.. perhaps teach me? I have read some of the peoms on the site ...

That was excellent, i wish i can write poetry like that~! Keep it UP!

Thanks for the reveiws! Amy i wanted to show the reader how lifeless and boring Jason is, this is only 1 chapter, you have no idea what else was going ...

I've just downloaded it, ill read the whole thing and note down the minor mistakes I pass by. Hope that would help. Only problem is I have to print it ...

This is the first chapter of one of my stories. ENJOY. The Junior Accountant Thirty year old Jason Polimer awoke slowly, grumbling as he did. He turned over to the ...

Hey Erin! I'm new too, YRS is a nice place, you will get use to it after a couple of posts. Erin, whats your favorite color, book, number, and website?