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Some of the punctuation was off, for example you probably needed a period at the end of the poem and at the end of several of the other stanzas. But ...

I hate myself as well, as do many people I’m sure. That's a bit awkward, I'm not sure how to change it but it is awkward However, you act like ...

honestly, this is about a book, or rather a girl's feelings in a book. It's from the Trinistyr Triliogy, talk about obscurity. But it's about her feelings towards her sister ...

That's really, really cute and yet at the same time, really melancholy. Those are two emotions that you don't often see together. I liked the bit about the smile.

That was really sad. I have to admit, but something about it reminded me of a Utada song (sorry if you don't get the reference), but that's a good thing. ...

Is there a reason this is called emo poetry (which should be capitalized by the way)? Becaues I found it far from emo, it's beautiful and not really that depressing.

I FREAKING LOVE BATMAN!

as you all should know I love Alice in Wonderland (though it's not my favorite Disney movie...it's Peter Pan), and I really like the web comic When Curiosity Met Insanity ...

I had some issues with the rhyme scheme. You have couplets, half of them rhymed, the other half didn't. Boredom is domintaing my life but I am trying to take ...

1. That boy looks like my cousin when he was younger, so it was a little scary. 2. How in the world did you get that shot? You're either a ...

You rarely ever see a guy's point of view in this situation, especially in poetry. So it really made me think about what guys think after a break up (or ...

This is great. I love NaNoWriMo calenders!

Now it's over, {space} my dear and there are many questions I would have asked but now it's too late To tell you the truth it wasn't so hard but ...

I always thought it was sci-fi, because it was set in space and had aliens and such. I still have a hard time thinking of it as fantasy...but maybe I ...

In French, Adieu is a final goodbye. This was written about my ex-best friend Teenage girls are funny creatures I don't think I understand most of them (Even though I ...