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I really like the imagery in here. You used some verbs and descriptions that I wouldn't have thought about. Like Clawing at my hem. I really wouldn't think about something ...

I suck so i was wondering if i could get some pointers? Right, so you better not use first person, contractions, or slang. It makes you sound unintelligent in essay ...

I HATE RHYMING! I like free verse. But whatever, here ya go. Something depressing for funsies. These are dark and deadly times we live in. I hate to admit it, ...

Wrote this in like, three minutes. I edited it a little, but not much... What do you thing??? Think. Sorry, that annoyed me ------- The pain has lessened, but it ...

When your world is crashing around u YOU Someone u You think may never accept u You Gives u you the hope u you have been longing for For when ...

I know how this feels. I HATE writer's block, but you could have used more words than just wishing and waiting. That gets a bit repetitive.

Alright so, I was on a Speech trip this past weekend. And I decided, on the way back, that I would listen to Nightmare Revisted. It spawned this. I don't ...

Woah, I really like this. I really like what you're trying to say. However, [quote="DisturbedDisorder"] Listen to them fight over What they’re trying to sell. that bit sounds slightly awkward. ...

Vice. One a day became three, she was upset at me, You should have had them on second lines, it just sounds better she hated me. But all of us ...

I like how this is about a horse. I think every word you said could be true (I've never had a horse, so I wouldn't know.), but I don't doubt ...

Ever wish you could start again, I think you should have a question mark here. ________________ Rid of strife, Rid doesn't seem to be the right word ____________ I miss ...

Just a little poem that's not even really a poem, just a...well I don't know. Lyric poem seemed to fit the mood best. This is inspired by two things. Lily ...

This really reminded me of a Slyvia Plath poem...and I like Slyvia Plath so that's a good thing. (Just don't stick your head in an oven). The only thing that ...

This is a Shakespearian Sonnet yes? Great job! It's not cheezy like mine was. You did really well on illustrating what you were trying to say. I really liked the ...

What kind of music did you imagine this to? I imagined something slow, maybe acoustic guitars, piano, and violins? The verse-chorus thing threw me off at first but then I ...