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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-takesabreath-AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Loved that. Mary-Sues/Gary-Stus annoy me, but I LOVE creating them on purpose.

This is the most personal poem I have ever written, besides Curtains...which is about the same boy. Notice, There are a lot of theatrical references, and many references to things ...

Curtains up! What a show! A girl on stage. Her feelings out, For the world to see. She feels exposed. He's right in front of her. He has no idea ...

I like the shot, a lot (hey rhyme!) however, the whole rawr means Iloveyou thing is sooooo hackneyed and annoying.

STORY OF MY LIFE...except...replace Max with Cody...kinda....I guess.... This poem is slightly emo though. Dear Max, Do you remember? I looked up, and awkwardly caught you looking at me and ...

This will mostly be a play by play of stuff I loved rather than a critique. 1. Throes of passion threw me not, A sin I did not suit. For ...

Only two little grievances You lost your rhyme scheme here: Spring has come and all animals stir From the mouse in the corner To the horse in the barn and ...

thoughts clouded my mind like paint from a brush diffusing in clear water clouding it tarnishing it. my veins pulsed my blood rushed I shook, silently but violently like an ...

I'm not going to lie, I expected this to suck because you misspelled heart, but I found this simply amazing. However I keep it here for safe keeping (this seems ...

I'll give you three hints to let you know who this is about. -He belongs to Peter S. Beagle. -He's from the Last Unicorn. -He's a magician. He's my fictional ...

The Other Side by Patrick Mulvihill Let me tell you a story of a soul Lost, alone, with no control He walked alone (I feel like you dropped your rhyme ...

He sits on the street, owns none I feel like none should be nothing but a guitar, Other than that this was a really good poem and I really liked ...

This was hilarious! I loved the one about the math. So, quick question, KylexKattt?

Alright what do you mean this is bad? It's amazing! Alright, a bit awkward, but I love the subject. Him Who is the one they call Him? This doesn't seem ...

I'm not looking to be yelled at by anyone of either side, Wiccan or Christian, though I feel like I'm setting my self up for Christian Fundamentalists to scream at ...