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Astronomer

tell me the story about how the sun loved the moon so much he died every night to let her breathe.

  • YWS Re: The YWS Critique Sandwich

    I just wrote my first review, and I will definitely be using the critique sandwich for my second.

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello, I'm Moonwatcher!

    Thank you, Liz (if I can call you that)! I tried my first review, and the critique sandwich seems useful. I write spiritual things, fantasy, and some science fiction. What ...

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello, I'm Moonwatcher!

    Thank you, Holysocks!

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello, I'm Moonwatcher!

    Hello, I'm Moonwatcher, and I'm new to the site. I'm really hoping this place isn't like certain writing websites. I'm usually good at navigating things on my own, but help ...

    Apr 5, 2016


As the notifications drift in I stop and wonder. Why do they take so long? Do they have adventures we don't know about? I bet they do. When they come I will ask myself. What amazing adventure has this straggling notification been on? How far did it travel, and why didn't it take me?
— TypoWithoutCoffee