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thanks for the comments & critique. really appreciate it. i know i have to re-edit some parts. :)

wow, this is very impressive. good job, and a very different approach :)

Teenage pregnancy may be a shame, Thinking of homework then baby names Lacking the sense of where to go For Millie, the average "high school hoe" Dumped by friends as ...

I should’ve known it was Daffy Duck all along; then again it’s hard to tell the difference between a fictional duck’s voice and the shrill of my sister’s. The piercing ...

i liked this. i mostly like the astmophere of it, it leaves you in a state of confusion and sorrow and the story itself. and you conjure up a dark ...

i liked this. i thought it was really good, i havnt read or crituqed in ages and then i came across yours and i thought it was excellent. keep up ...

both. i write as a hobby, but i do eventually hope to get published someday.

Kind of got the idea from this picture i saw of jennifer aniston. Altered a couple of things though and added some stuff. A beauty, asleep. Title slightly self explanitory ...

thanks for the comment. i know some parts need re-doing, but as i said i did rush it/ but thanks for the comment ;)

Dinner

i used frgaments quite alot. alot of revision and practice is a good way to avoid them. you'll learn eventually that it is easy to over come these fragments.

Again...i rushed the hair, i should really stop doing that, its a bad habit. A little satisfied with this although i know i need to improve on my shading.

yeah....i've already posted it, its on page one. i know it dosnt entirely look like her...but i lost my paitence to go back and edit it

thank-you very much. jennifer sniton is a american actress, shes the star of "Freinds"...recently divorced Brad Pitt

Amerie is a singer, she sang "1 thing" and "Touch".