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In no particular order :- 1. Tell Me No Lies - Malorie Blackman deception, manipulation and bribary, i love it. i must have read this when i was about fifteen, ...

this is good. i actually had a sister called ella who died, so when i read this it reminded me of her. but yeah, this is good, it was the ...

"stop trying to lick my letterbox" what would you do if matt groening admitted your family were the real inspiration for "the simpson's"?

Wow, well i liked this. I think from: You can't deny my existence, I don't understand your perplexity Of why standing so close to me creates it's own ecstasy I'll ...

wow, i really like the first one and the ending is really good. the second one, was good, alot of descritpions although i was slightly confused with the theme. keep ...

I like this first line, it brought me into the second stanza I look at her and stare; deep into her eyes the third stanza i foudn it hard to ...

i was slightly confused with the first two lines. skin smells like heat? maybe it's mebut i dont really understand that the "oh" seems alittle out of place but its ...

this is good, although you describe it a little too much. but yeah, chocolate, every one loves it.

i like this, although it reminds me of a song more than a poem. i think it's the "oh" that you included it made me want to sing for some ...

this was a quick one, and its not my best. it was one of those, out of my head moments i plotted onto word. I crave for hope in your ...

I found it slightly bland, nothing struck out for me, and i think you missed a comma on the second paragraph. The question seemed a little out of place, maybe ...

i hope this is rough. no commas or fullstops so i was out of breath while reading it, spelling mistakes and no paragraphing. but, i am guessing this was extremley ...

Nice twist. In the third paragraph you kept mentioning door which seemed a little repetitive, seeing as we know what the boy is touching. Apart from that it's a good ...

lol thegirlwhofateloves that opening made me laugh. anyway my worst opening would be, once upon a time in a land unknown there was this little house on top of a ...

lol. i dont know whether the last line was intended to make people laugh, but it made me laugh. anyway, i like this, its good, simple and a good riddle ...