AstrangedbeaR

She sits alone rocking in the corner Trying to remember what happened to her She knows now why there is a mourner i liked thses first three lines, kinda makes ...

wow, this was really good, the words you used to create the scene were excellent, first line was great, very different from the other poems i have, keep up the ...

good job, although i didnt really enjoy it as much as i wanted to, the repetitive, i can's and i can't were quite annoying, plus for me i think the ...

lol kewl bio, kinda made me laugh :)

erm...i liked this i thought this was kinda good actually, created a good feel of being in a mental hospital or a hospital if i pput that correctly. i do ...

maybe you should have made what you told me the poem was about a little bit clearer than i would have understood

i liked this poem i think it was very good, although the short questions didnt really appeal to me. it did for the second stanza but then as you continued ...

erm, this was a pretty good poem i liked it although there were times i did capture the meaning and then i kinda got confused lol. whether it is me ...

i liked both of your poems i thiought they were very good and left that "feel" behind as most poems should do. very good job and well done. oh and ...

erm...they were good i kinda like them alday i didnt actually capture the true meaning of them, however i think you did a good job and keep writing :)

kewl, i look forward to reading them

hey fire, thanks for welcoming, i've been here a day already and i really like it. and the blogs too :D

what i do is read and analyse the way my favourie authors write (good for time-keeping)

i write because the thought of creating imaginary worlds and people, plots and storylines etc... makes me smile and i enjoy it to be honest. i've been writing since primary ...

generally when writing i usually come up with the title first which is kinda wierd. I've only ever planned a novel once, that i havnt started working on chapter by ...