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O.k, well i'm not gonna be harsh...this was wasn't really that bad. It did seem like a euology that goes on...loses the touch and then tries to rebuild it at ...

Greetings ashley...and welcome :D

i visit during during the day...its a kewl place to hang out on the web...and we can roleplay! wahey!

all adds up now, kinda relates to the poem in some ways

nice, sad yet nice. dont really know what the title has to do with it? nice title though i like it, although it's in french something about thank-u. bearing in ...

nice poem. good use or words, i enjoyed reading it. nice flow. havn't got much bad to say about it. keep up the good work, for you are talented lol.

nice i liked reading it, and i guess i enjoyed it. liked the pausing throughout it...felt like a song. good job though

erm this is good, don't understand the tiny sentances you used, didn't really understand what you were trying to put across. however good poem and nice words.

this is an interesting poem, nice words, good meaning, nice title, one thing "Maybe you could so the same with me" im guessing you mean do, a little bit of ...

thsi is nice, i like. erm...didnt really understand what it was about hmmm...but maybe i need to read it again to get a deeper insight to what you are talking ...

its good...i dont think you should have put (16+) in the title coz there is no actual descrptions of sex or anything. its a good poem, but seems a bit ...

woow. this was lovely. taken back...love the words you use, nice choice of them. i hae nothing bad to say about it lol. this is really good... *taken back*

wow...this is an excellent ballad...i love it, definatly sends a message across...(dont trust strangers). i was really drawn into it, and i think its good how the last stanza is ...

the first one is beautiful. you are very talented and creative

i love the second one, i love what she's wearing, it's very cool. your a very talented artist :)