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Re: When a flower withers
And she was the sunshine of my morning A cloud of love floating by she looked up to the heaven one day And heard Him say: 'It's time to come ...
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Re: The Secret of Experiment Block 20D
Dr. Ivor Del Treston had a secret. One that he would never tell anyone, if he could help it. Not that he did much speaking in any case, mind you. ...
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Re: Thirteen
Thirteen Bravo's. Very Good work!
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Tribulation
Overall, I like the clear and simple message in the poem. Most poetry fail without being abstract . . . this one is an exception. Head's achin' Back's breakin' This ...
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Re: Nagori Hokosha
Overall impression, this story seems very interesting. I am curious to know what journey lies ahead for the 5. I like how you DESCRIBED each character as you introduced them ...
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Re: Haunting Darkness
Bravo! You really know how to capture a feeling and/or image. Keep it up.
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Re: I hate my father
I like the conflict in your story. It's very interesting. But I will have to agree with the above statement, the pace is to fast. If you look at the ...
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Re: Issues - Deleted
Absolutely beautifull. Very inspiring. Keep it up.
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: I can't make you love me.
She never believes it when I say And I never believe it when she say I love you And I shouldn't complain about it I should take it like a ...
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Re: Imagine This
Beautifull. And what a suprising end. This is the best prose I've read for this week. Excellent work
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Re: Speaking Of It...
This is beautifully written. The beauty lies in the simpicity of the words you used. Overall I am impressed. But that's not all . . . Is this a true ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Replace Batteries Immediately!
Overall, this is an inspiring article. The battery/soul analogy you used was very creative. A few things you might want to work on . . . but in the style ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Soul to Soul
'Daniel my brother you are older then me do you still feel the pain of the scars that won't heal?' - Elton John My father was a soldier. Major Summers. ...
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Re: What You Meant To Her
It's totally impossible to review any of it. It's beautifull. Perfect. Goodluck.
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Re: Before I Die
Overall this poem is good but very . . . 'generic', in that it lacks style and creativity. I personally love poems with a twist. Poems which, when you read ...
Apr 4, 2011