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It would be absolutely fabulous if you could review my short story Homecoming today. I'm not a huge fan of writing things in the ambiguous genre "literary fiction" so I ...

Thanks, I found it. =) It was reviewstream.com. Not really sure how that's going to work out, but I figured it was worth a shot. I'll be sure and check ...

No, that's not it. Thanks for trying though! =) Um... Yeah. I think was up about two weeks ago.

Hi! I really hope someone can help me with this. You see, there was a link on the home page under "staff picks" and it took you to a page ...

Its not bad! Actually, its pretty good. I've kind of got a feeling you found this on the internet though. (I've done it myself!) But if you are doing the ...

I like it. The hair is probably my favorite feature about the whole drawing. As for the whole 'calm and tranquile' goal, you're very close. You see, when I look ...

I love it! You can really see the texture of the snow. Something entirely foreign to this little southern girl.

I like it! Its interesting and deep. It doesn't quite feel like poetry to me though, more like lyric prose. But of course that's just me. =)

I usually try to keep my chapters around 1,500 words, but that's just me. It depends on where you want to go. Generally each chapter should be a set up, ...

I like this, its interesting. I think you could do without some of the repetitiveness and choppiness. Some of it adds to the setting, but you've got a bit much. ...

Sorry. I'm sure its blindingly obvious, but I can't figure it out. :( Could someone tell me how to add another user as a friend? Thanks!

Hi everyone! I'm not exactly new new. I had an account a little over a year ago, but then didn't get on much, and (of course!) I lost my info. ...

I have to agree with NeverendingPages. The poem is nice but I can't quite see where its going. Many of the rhymes seemed forced. I think it might help if ...

This is very pretty. Its not exactly epic, but definitely quote-worthy. ;) I like the picture this poem creates, but I do whish it were a bit longer.

I love this! Its a beautiful prayer, and poem in general. If you write many of these you could try putting together a devotional/prayer book and maybe even publishing it. ...