ArthurDent

Thanks for the comments. I understand what you mean, the audience will probably need more on screen action to keep their ADD attention spans (which I attribute to Hollywood and ...

Hey! Thanks for commenting, man. I'm so glad you liked the humour, after watching Tarantino's films I've kinda lost my perspective on this kind of dialogue so it's reasuring to ...

Hi, This is the opening conversation for my film. It has some ROUGH LANGUAGE, so watch out. This is a rough draft so I want as much feedback as possible, ...

i thought this was a cool concept, and the incorrect paragraphs addd to the voice of the character. . Thankyou for commenting!! I think I did address the men that ...

this was a nice thought, but wasn't expressed very well :\ Thanks for taking the time to comment. The paragraphs went against the concept of the story because the concept ...

In this part of the city, if you stood still, there was no sign of life. The people had punched out from work and returned to their houses. The animals....had ...

Hey, thanks heaps for the comment. It's really good to know that people are willing to help me improve my stories. I suppose it does have a lot of mistakes ...

Here is a story I wrote for English. I'm posting to find out how to post and stuff. The House He had walked slowly to the abandoned house. Or had ...