Artemis_Phoenix

An annoying buzz penetrated the peaceful dream of Zima Yuzuki, but then he realized it was his cell phone. He opened his phone. “Hello,” he said tiredly. “Zima, you lazy ...

Well, Alice you've hit the nail on the head. Of what I know so far. But in the second sentence you forgot to capitalize the I a few words in. ...

Hi. I'm Artemis or as my friends call me Minion. I'm a newbie and I need help and how to post storys and how to critec. My friends, Alice and ...