ArtOfSilence

Too many typos in my last reply, I'm ashamed. Anyway, I missed one thing this third time around. This starts to answer some of my questions about the transformation, though ...

Yeah thats a good idea. I'll try this one more time, maybe keep things a bit shorter and remember to copy everything before I post lol. First off I agree ...

Not quite sure what's going on here but I just got the same response when I tried to reply again after another 30minutes of writing! Arg! I'll try again in ...

Hey! Not sure what happened but 'requested URI too long for server' or something just deleted the response I spent an hour writing. Perhaps it was too long? Frustrating. Anyway, ...

Hey niteowl! Glad to to see you back again. Sorry for taking so long to respond. I got a bit of tunnel vision trying to rewrite a few chapters between ...

Thanks for the review! Sorry it took me awhile to get to respond. I wrote a full response but YWS went down as I tried to post it's gone. Let's ...

Hey everyone. Just wanted to apologize for taking a while to respond to reviews. I've gone back and done some work on my punctuation around dialogue (although that isn't in ...

Hi. Thanks for taking the time to review! This really felt like the wrong time for this bit of exposition. The previous paragraph was really good and the last sentence ...

Hey. Thanks for the review! First off, seriously don't worry about the nit-picky stuff. Even if I don't agree, which I do with a lot of them on rereading. It ...

Hey there. Thanks for the review! I don't think my username here has ever changed but I wasn't writing for...the last 6-8 years. I'm 26 now, does that still count ...

Hey! Thanks for the review. From the sounds of things I think you would have preferred the original version of the first few chapters. Chapter one and two were the ...

(This may be double posted as I accidentally wrote it as a guest haha.) Hi. Thanks for the review! Good catch on the finery thing and a synonym for prince ...

Hey there! Thanks for taking the time to review and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Some good criticism too! I'll definitely add some more description of the elders and as ...

Hey. If anyone reads this and is wondering if/when I'm going to post another chapter I've got some bad news. My pc died on me a week or so ago ...

Hey again. Thanks for being here! I just read over my reply to your first review and realized I somehow said the same thing twice. Please ignore that. Extending the ...