ArtOfSilence

Where Shadow Steps Prologue Alica. In this act I curse you to life without parents, but I gift you with a chance to avoid our people’s fate. You may never ...

The best part is how intense it is. Personally I also like where this piece seems to be steering, with My friends and family would never look at me the ...

The best thing about your story is its uniqueness. I haven't read anything quite like this. Also the voice, or, Melany speaking to 'it' (whatever it was) was great, very ...

For me my desire to write a novel sprung from reading so much I slowly became insanely enthused as to writing my own. To be completely honest, I suppose a ...

Haha. Just have to say that I love the Storylines: -A hero must go on a quest to SAVE THE WORLD. -A heroine must go on a quest to SAVE ...

Interesting. I also noticed the Darren Shan references. Enjoyed it and I like this kind of story. Quite a few grammatical errors but mostly fine. I think you should read ...

You are correct of course. I phrased it wrongly. What i meant was, don't bother doing research just so you don't offend a few people as those people need to ...

The reviewer above makes many good points and looks to have solid nitpicks except for some things such as the irony they didn't get, I see as quite clear. Also ...

Thanks for the fantastic reviews :thud: Un-marred means flawless or perfect, in fact i might change it to one of those as un-marred isn't exactly common. I've gone over everything ...

Hey. I would like to think I'm almost finished on this piece, but when you read your own writing you miss things :) . So just if you get the ...

Thanks :D , and i totally understand being not to with it sometimes. Seriously, you have no idea. Anyway, It's because shes homeless. Which you find out in the first ...

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it and I will definitely be writing more:D. Yea I'm not so sure about that specific line either. I don't like it, but I want ...

I enjoyed this despite the lack of action and i really hope that the scientists end up as Space Marines of different sorts or something as that would just be ...

I can see others point of view about the hook thing, but i am leaning towards that the idea of Cara being a carrier of the virus is the hook. ...

I started around age 12 after reading way, way (way) too much for a normal person and deciding i wanted to write my own novels.