ArtLuvr19

I appreciate everybody's constructive criticism. Thank you! But just FYI, it has an adrupt ending because it was late at night when I wrote this and I REALLY had to ...

Beautiful. Just beautiful. It's sad, but at the end, you can't help but feel happy for the child.

Same rules apply here that were stated in my two previous stories. I know the main idea is stupid, but what are ya gonna do? Before reading this, I'm afraid ...

I thank you all for your kind words about my story. **tear** I don't care if you're being honest or just taking pity on me...I just like compliments! Crysi actually ...

Jim Williams dramatically and sexily walked down the platform of his ship. He dramatically and sexily turned his head to the gargantuan fortress, and dramatically and sexily gasped. "Good Garfunkel! ...

My personal favorite was the bridge. It just soothed me for some reason. I'm not sure why... I also liked the banyan tree. Those always tend to help me relax.

Before I begin, I would like to explain why I am writing this piece of crap. First off, I am bored and don't have a life. Second, I need a ...

Very nice. It made me think. I have no constructive criticism, but I liked it.

This was very interesting, but kinda short. It's a really good introduction. I know my review isn't very constructive, but I liked this story.

This story no longer exists. I would delete it, but the confounded website won't let me. Since everyone said it was horrible, but didn't say how I could improve it, ...

How could you do that? You horrible beast! Affectionate? Sensitive? No, not in the least. Oh, you think this is funny? Wipe that grin off your face! What were you ...

Very nice. The rhymes (sp?) were very creative. I never really got a chance to thank my chair for all of its hard work. Thank you, chair.

The wind howled. The rain poured down in heavy sheets pressing down on her body. Her mouth was sore and dry. Her chest was heaving and threatening to burst. She ...

Beautiful. And sad. It's been a long time since I've seen anything like this. But it really says something about all of the horrors in the world. Very well-written. Bravo.

I can totally relate. Which one of us hasn't shoved a battery up their nose? What? No one but me? Oh dear... I enjoyed this one. Tramatic childhood experiences...good times, ...