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I really enjoyed this one. It was just so entertaining! I'm not a big player of Halo 3, but I can still kind of relate to the whole addiction to ...

Very nice. Very, very nice. It's just so...remarkable. The symmetry is stunning. The word choice is something I could never think of. It's full of beauty and disgust. I love ...

An interesting idea. A bit cliche, but still interesting. If you continued with the part about taking over Microsoft, that would be good. You've got some spelling and grammar errors, ...

I enjoyed this. It was well-written, but, like everyone else is saying, not satiracal (is that even a word?) enough. If you go to Uncyclopedia, they give some really good ...

Chapter Two Jim Williams gazed up at the towering wall that stood before him. He picked up a twig and poked the fence. The stick immediately burst into flames. “Dang ...

This is interesting. If you put just a bit more description (kind of like what kitty15 said) and used a bit less repetition, I think it would go a little ...

Just FYI, the biography is so long 'cause the minimum amount of words was something like 400. Sorry, but I forgot to mention that. Forgive me for commenting on my ...

This thing was written for my seventh grade music class. It was a "biography on a famous musician" type thing. I'm fairly new to the site, so I'm not entirely ...

I enjoyed this. It was just a little bit predictable, but not disappointing. The very last sentence--the one where the devil picked up the phone--wasn't exactly "scary". You could have ...

Very nice! Reminds me of Treasure Island...I wonder why. Woo-hoo! Girl pirates rock! The only thing that I would have changed is to maybe have her holding her sword out ...

Very good color and detail! I know everyone else is saying that but...well, I always like compliments. The texture of the fur and horns are very well done. I don't ...

Thanks everyone for the nice comments and constructive criticism. I cannot say how much that kind of thing means to me in my writing. as fore speling mistckes, im justt ...

Ha! This was funny! Being the idiot I am, I don't have any constructive criticism except for the fact that I liked it. I will admit that I'm surprised you ...

Read “Do Not Read This Story.” No seriously, just read it. All of my stories are connected to “Do Not Read This Story.” I’m sorry, but I’m running out of ...

Very nice, very beautiful. Well, I've got no constructive criticism, but I liked it!