Armadian

I liked your poem. Especially with your words. You left a certain impulse after it. It made me feel your emotion. Embers Flicker. Alluring, ethereal glow. Illuminating, enticing. Affixing everything ...

I enjoyed reading your poem, except all the stanza made it lose some of its rhythm for me. Maybe consider putting it into 2 big stanza's like this. You were ...

First off, this poem was very good but the only thing I had a problem with was: The earth is no longer fruitful, Its once great cities lay still as ...

Whoa, the last one of these I did was really depressing, and I wish I could delete it, but heres a little about me now. Lets see, where do I ...

Hey guys!! So yeah, I'm Nikki. It's been a year since I was on the site, but after a long year, I am officially back! Anyone remember me? Missed you ...

This poem is very, interesting. It has a lot of feeling. Good job!

Tacoma

I liked your poem very, very much. But the one issue I had was that you rhymed 'you' and 'you' in the first stanza. Other than that it was perfectly ...

Yeah some one really did die. My friend Hannah. September 2nd. I liked this... I liked the first two lines but then after that things sort of got ... wordy, ...

Short and sweet, Pheonixfire. Very nively done, but perhaps one thing to look at... Breathing out And breathing in The world is ever, Ever turning On this water-world we spin ...

I say leave it to the family.

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