Armadian

Again, another well written poem. Are you sure you are new to poetry? It seems like you've been writing for ages. Great job!

I love how you wrote this! Good job, and everyones pretty much got all the problems in the poem! Great Job!

I loved the first one and the second one. I haven't had time to go and pick up the 3rd though.

Thanks... I didn't want to give it any organization, that's how the words came out of my head (after watching over 75% of my friends perform in the last three ...

HAM!!!!...I mean.....MONKEY! NO! I MEAN DRAGON! No! I mean MONKEY!

First thing I see is, organization. It makes it hard to read. You should consider make stanza's at each period, but thats totally up to you. Anyways, great job, keep ...

If you like MANGA/ANIME you should help make the MANGA/ANIME usergroup happen, its in the advertisment thing. My favorite anime is Bleach as well as my manga.

I sat there, watching the water move gently down the stream. And it's, soothing. I fell in. And let its peaceful current, carry me off. So many things below its ...

The discomfited fidgeting in my hand, the twitch as my fingers rub the door frame, five times too many, five times too many, five times too many. and again. While ...

I loved the last stanza like everyone else. I don't see anything wrong with it. It had a nice relaxing flow too. Good job and keep up the excelent writing!

I'm going to buy a Wii specifically for the purpose of playing the new Smash Bros game, lol. Me too. :D I can't wait to see how you get to ...

My question: Should Euthanasia be allowed to be performed on animals? I don't want this topic to roll over into should it be performed on humans, because humans, is a ...

Crazy Me This is my crazy song. My faith. My redemption. My hopes. The turning of a new leaf. This is me. Unveiled. Untold. Unfinished. The birth of a legend. ...

Nice :) I like the instrument playing. Ant tennis, you play tennis :D that's cool. Aah hop along with my friends when your talking about "Bleach". How about Naruto, do ...

I get the idea that your trying to make the reader get, but you should probably consider fixing your grammar and spelling, and then organizing your work into stanza's. That ...