Armadian

Banned for liking Relient K. (Not a bad thing, I like them too.)

I have been here since 2005 and it seems the same.

Excelent Matt! I enjoyed the prologue and the chapter. :D Really all I had problems with was: We moved far away to help deal with the pain of not being ...

This poem seems mixed up and not very organized. I can't really get a rhythm to this so its kinda hard to read. I consider organizing your lines into more ...

The descriptions were wonderful and I can't wait to read more. I have the same question as Rieda.

I agree with what Snoink said, and I also think you should try putting it into stanza's.

GOOD NIGHT CAN OPENER! *snuggles with can opener*

I love this poem. It means so much and in so little words. It has a "deep" feeling to it, as I already told you. I also love your word ...

Yep, the point of view works perfectly and I already told you I love your story!

Hey Janelle! Wonderfully written, just found some capitalization problems. I'll change the color to red if I find it shouldnt be capitalized and I will change the color to blue ...

I read this already, so your wondering why it didn't take me too long to critique it. Is this based off Final Fantasy 12? I liked how you fully described ...

I was thinking the same of as all of you. I think I might go free verse and describe the leaves blowing around or something. Hmm....

Myth pretty much got everything. Its an awesome story, and I can't wait to read more! Keep writing!

Spiritless leaves quake. Tangerine petals vanish. A breath of fresh air. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I wrote this last night, and I don't know

I haven't seen a cinquain in a while either. Both of them were nicely written! Great job!